Dancing to
the sounds of raindrops,
while they flood my
washed up shoes.
I can hear as
bells are ringing,
people run to
pay their dues.
I resist
but can not hide
as a tear
reaches my eye.
Sway around
move to the rhythm
of the droplets
falling down.
Failed to stop
I keep on moving
as my clothes
feel like the lake.
Never felt
exhilaration
crash so hard
my body shakes.
Felt a stillness
taking over
making this
my final dance.
Bitting hard
pierced my own lip
thanks to hope
received a chance.
– Grace Y. Estevez-Reddy
My poem ” Nobody ” was published on The Writers Club . I would like to thank their team for showcasing this piece.
Originally Published on January 2, 2021
Goodness, this was powerful and quite vividly painted.
Thank you so much, Joyce. Glad you liked it.💕🙏💕
I sure did!
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I can feel the rhythm
Happy to hear that.💕
what beautiful imagery Grace.. Love this line: 💖💖💖
“Bitting hard
pierced my own lip
thanks to hope
received a chance
Thank you, my friend. So happy you enjoyed it.💕
You’re so welcome always.. I so did! 💖💖
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Nice one
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Beautifully written!
Thanks so much 💕
Lovely poem, the imagery was great. Have a nice day!
Thanks so much, my friend.Have a wonderful day too.💕
Wow! You have created a beautiful picture with your words. The rhythm and writing is so mesmerising. Fascinating write!❤
Thanks so much, my friend. Glad you liked it.💕
Beautiful imagery, Grace! It’s a powerful poem. Good one 👌💐💖
Delighted to hear you enjoyed, KK. Thank you 💕
You’re so welcome, Grace 💖
Absolutely beautiful, powerful & heartfelt poem…”I keep on moving
as my clothes feel like the lake.”…❤️
Im so happy you liked it, my dear friend. Thank you for always supporting me, dear Navin. I truly appreciate you.💕
You’re welcome, dear Grace…keep expressing ✨❤️💫
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Congratulations on publication Grace. A lovely poem
Thank you so much, my friend.💕
My pleasure
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Your pen is excellent, as always, friend Grace. It is a pleasure to read your poetic works.
Hugs.
So kind of you, Lincoln. Thank you.💕
Beautiful lines
Thank you so much.💕