Waves of old thoughts,
splash with regret,
powerful force,
crash without rest.
Infinite course,
tough to forget,
memories caught,
in the mind’s net.
An orange hue
gleams straight ahead,
attacks the blues
kills sorrows dead.
Gold tinted views
defeats all dread,
repeats pure truths
so peace can spread.
Ocean shines warm
with amber light,
great dreams transform
into plain sight.
Calms the rough storms,
wrongs become right,
arch rock wall forms
twinkles shine bright.
Clear wishes fly,
hopes float so high,
touch the blue sky
release deep sighs.
Close misty eyes
see concrete signs,
visions comply
sad knots untie.
– Grace Y. Estevez – Reddy
Written for FFFC #200 hosted by Fandango
SENSATIONAL!! The rhyming is truly masterful here and the imagery is just lovely. Beautifully written as always, dear Grace 🤍🤍
So happy you enjoyed it, Grace. Thanks a bunch. Truly means so much to me.💕
Such a beautiful poem Grace. Each regret is a chance to shift and I love how you captured that in each of your stanza’s so brilliantly. Luckily, I have no regrets! Happy day ahead my friend! 💞
Thanks so much. So very true. That’s wonderful.💕
Leaves me completely hopeful and soothed. Artfully written! 🤗
Thank you so much 💕
Well penned Grace. The ocean does bring hope to mind in irs ebb and flow.
Thanks so much. It sure does.💕
A beautiful poem for a beautiful image
Thank you so much, dear Sadje.💕
Most welcome
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Very well done, Greg. Put it to music and you’ll have a big hit on your hands!
Sorry, I meant Grace.
No worries.💕
Happy you enjoyed it. Thank you so much.💕
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Great imagery, Grace, with beautiful message. Well penned 👌💐💖
Thank you so much, dear KK💕
My pleasure, Grace 💖
Lovely imagery and a beautiful and lyrical piece, Grace! This would make a beautiful song. 💖
Thank you so much, Eugenia. That’s so nice to hear, my friend.💕
My pleasure, Grace!💖
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gorgeous imagery and melding of words and message Grace!💞
So happy you enjoyed, my friend. Thank you so much, Cindy.💕🙏💕
It’s always my pleasure dear Grace! 💞
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So much imagery and the colors really pop with words alone…masterfully done, Grace! 💞💞💞
Thank you so much, Dawn. 💕😊🙏💕
This is beautiful.
Glad you enjoyed it. Thank you so much.💕
I love the flow of this!
Happy you enjoyed it, my friend. Thanks so much.💕
I love to enjoy your poetic feeling and what you express with great depth.
Hugs and hugs, Grace.
Thanks a bunch, my friend.💕