Who painted tears onto her face?
What made her turn away from grace?
Where did she run while still in place?
When did her slip become her pace?
Why is her mind caught up in space?
How can she find her own escape?
How did she build a sweet escape?
Why is her sweet song heard in space?
When was she tuned and synched to pace?
Where did she flow to find her place?
What did she carry to spread grace?
Who placed happy tears on her face?
– Grace Y. Estevez – Reddy
Cleverly written. I don’t Recall ever seeing a poem being structured this way. Great write up!
Thanks so much. Iām not sure if this is a standard structure. I mostly just free flow. Thanks again for for your kind words. I truly appreciate it.š
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Oh my goodness!! This is connecting to me on such a DEEP level.
I am thrilled to hear this. Thanks so much.š
Such a beautiful poem, full of pain, beauty, love, and light, which resonates deeply in my heart. ā¤ļø Gorgeous, Grace. ā¤ļø
Thank you so much, my friend.That is so nice to hear.šā¤ļøš
Youāre most welcome, Grace. Always. ā¤ļøš„°
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Expertly done my dear
Thank you so very much.š
Such beautiful poem
Thanks so much, NDš
A beautiful poem of pain and hope. Beautifully structured and written. Well done!
Thank you so very much.š
Beautifully penned. I love this piece!
Iām so glad you liked it. Thanks so much.š
Youāre welcome!
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Who place happiness on my face
It’s your magnificent poetry dear Grace
What a wonderful comment, Reena! Thank you so much, I truly appreciate it.šā¤ļøš
That is so wise. A well structured piece of brilliant poetry. I really liked it very much!!!ā¤ā¤
Thank you so much.Iām glad you liked it.š
So beautifully and vividly strung dear Grace! ššš
Thanks so much, Cindy.š
Youāre so welcome Grace! š
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Deep words, beautiful as always my friend š
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The last line is awesome, Grace. A touching poem. Beautifully written ššš
Iām so glad you liked, KK. Thank you.š
You’re more than welcome š
I know, poetry such as this. š
Wow.Thatās great. I would love to read more like this and have never come across any or even know of a name for this type of structure, just found myself writing these from time to time. I would appreciate any information on it if possible. Thanks so much, K.š
Very nice rythm Grace! Very sweet and touching poem.
Looking forward the next ones! ā¤ā¤
That’s wonderful to hear. Thanks so much, Marie..š
My goodness. Grace, the structuring is fantastic. You are amazing!
Thanks so much, Vignesh. That is so nice to hear.š
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Well penned, Grace. Stay blessed always ā¤ļøā¤ļøā¤ļø
Thanks so much, Diana.ššā¤ļøā¤ļøšš
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Beautifully written! š
Thanks so much.š