A vast field offers pure hope,
nurses urgent need to cope.
Melodies in the warm breeze,
windmill rotates with pure ease.
Chirping birds sing as they fly,
rainbows cover light blue skies.
Messages echo the air,
wishes mend away all cares.
Nature trickles with glories,
pretty pictures paint stories.
Fireflies flutter all night,
so much beauty, divine sight.
Smilie to greet the silver moon,
How did this day pass so soon?
Yawn for sleep under star lights,
hear the wind sweep a goodnight.
– Grace Y. Estevez – Reddy
Written in response to Crimson Creative Challenge # 213, hosted by Crispina Kemp
So many marvelous serene images leap to mind in this amazing piece Grace.
Love these lines…
“Messages echo the air,”
“Nature trickles with glories”
“Smilie to greet the silver moon”
– what a marvelous painting of the joys of a day well spent. Brava!!!
Thank you so much, Suzette. This just put a smile on my face. Truly appreciate it .💕🙏💕
Always a pleasure 😊
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how peaceful <3
~David
Thanks so much, dear David.💕
I really want to visit this meadow, Grace… What an idyllic place! 🙂
Thanks so much, my friend.💕
Oooh, I love this so much!
Happy to hear that. Thanks so much 💕
Of course! Keep being your awesome self!
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A tranquil repose <3
Thanks so much 💕
A description of the lovely countryside, I like rural places. It’s great to relax and unwind. Great poem, Grace.
Thanks so much. Glad you liked it.💕
Beauty and tranquility transmit us your lyrics, with nature in all its splendor.
I love reading you, my friend Grace.
I send you a big hug.
Thank you so much, my friend. Hugs back at you.💕
truly a gift to calm our senses in our world Grace.. gorgeous!~ 💗
Thank you so much, Cindy.💕
A beautiful poem Grace
Thanks so much, Sadje 💕
My pleasure
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thanks for taking me to the meadows with your wonderful piece , Grace.
Happy you enjoyed. Thanks so much.💕
Beautiful poem Grace!
Thanks so much, my friend.💕
Serenity and tranquility of nature always attracts me. You have beautifully depicted here. Well done, dear Grace 💖💐
Thank you so much, my friend.💕
Always welcome, my friend 💖
This is absolutely stunning Grace!! The imagery is beyond beautiful, I can picture every part of this. I especially love that third verse, just divine!!! Amazingly done as always, my friend 🤍
Thanks so much, Grace. So happy you enjoyed.💕
Fantastic rhythm and rhymes, and wow, you certainly described the time
Thank you so much. So happy you enjoyed it .💕