A snake disguised as a tree branch
can stand quite still to reach attack,
wears a sweet smile while stabbing backs,
carries pink hues, to hide the black.
A victim role, you play too well,
pushing the fool, saying they fell,
sympathy gained is your best spell,
those by your side, live in your hell.
Do anything to get your way,
poisoned my cup, then caused delays,
your worried face was well displayed,
before your eyes, your plans decayed.
Paint yourself bright, nice, and sunny,
with veins that flow such sweet honey,
patient with a splash of funny,
acts to access unearned money.
Inner pity makes you so cruel,
taught by elders how to bend rules,
feed deep hunger, ignite your fuel,
attempts to feel like a rare jewel.
Hope one day you can understand,
most lives rarely follow a plan,
the pain delivered by your hands,
revert right back to where you stand.
– Grace Y. Estevez – Reddy
My poem “Jupiter” was published at The Writers Club I would like to thank their team for showcasing this piece.💕
Congratulations Grace. A strong poem on the power of karma or what goes around. Especially made clear in your last verse.
Thanks so much, Suzette. Hope you are having a wonderful Sunday.💕
Thank you!
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Strong. 💙
Thank you 💕
Congratulations Grace! 🥳👏🏼🤗 Girlfriend, now these lines are a “Don’t start nothin’, it won’t be nothin’ moment:
Hope one day you can understand,
most lives rarely follow a plan,
the pain delivered by your hands,
revert right back to where you stand.
Powerful lines with a cautionary message. 😱
Thanks so much. Kym. Absolutely, my friend. Hope you are having a wonderful day.💕
I am having a good day and I already know you are girlfriend. Have a FANtabulous week! 🥰💖😘
Absolutely. Thanks again 💕🙏💕
My pleasure Grace! 🤗💐🥰
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Love it
Thank you.💕
Stunning lines Grace ❤️❤️
Thank you so much.💕
Enjoyed – thank you for sharing
Thank you 💕
This is REALLY good. Congratulations.
Thanks so much. Glad you enjoyed it.💕
Congratulations. This one has teeth. I enjoyed it, dear friend.
Happy you enjoyed it, K. Thank you so much 💕
Congratulations on the publication of this masterpiece Grace.
Thank you so much, Sadje.💕
You’re most welcome
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Congratulations! It’s a wonderful poem.
Thanks so much 💕
You’re most welcome, Grace. 💜
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Wisdom
Thanks so much, Selma.💕
Interesting writing as all your poetic sentiments,
Hugs, friend Grace.
Thanks so much, dear Lincoln.💕
Congratulations, Grace on the publication of this beautiful poem! It’s so true and meaningful. The last two lines are simply superb 😊💖
Thanks so much, KK. Happy you enjoyed it, my friend 💕
You’re welcome always 😊
Beautifully scribed….
Thanks so much💕
Congratulations, dear Grace!!!! So well deserved! This piece is strong, powerful and touching. You do a marvelous job of delivering your message so profoundly yet with a rhythmic flow. Well done, my friend 🤍🤗
Thanks a bunch, Grace. Happy to hear that you enjoyed it, my friend. Hope you are having a wonderful day.💕
Congratulations on your powerful and brilliantly written piece, Grace! 💖
Thank you so much, Eugenia.💕
My pleasure, Grace! 💖
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Congratulations, Grace! Great job! 🪐
Thank you so much, Nancy.💕
Beautifully written Grace…emotional and powerful! Congratulations! 💞💞💞
Glad you enjoyed, Dawn. Thank you.💕
Congratulations!!! This is wonderful and well said.
Thanks a bunch, Belladonna .💕
You’re welcome 🌸🌸🌸
Congratulations! Always enjoy reading your words;-)
Thank you so much 💕