The clearest path can go unseen,
follow the steps that feel serene.
Walk through nature, enjoy the green,
breathe the air so pure and so clean.
Hard to find joy,
looking around.
Run to decoys,
that pull bliss down.
Immersive eyes see in between,
doubts and fears could not intervene.
Feel glee rise from what is foreseen,
capturing this amazing scene.
Cheer and wonder,
buried inside.
Dig deep under,
where ego hides.
Create a road so bright and sheen,
up from the sky, life is a screen.
Take a new chance, break the routine,
make this flat dream, a trampoline.
– Grace Y. Estevez – Reddy
Response to Sadje’s picture prompt on What do you see #135 May 23, 2022
Thank you, Grace, for a lovely poem.
Joanna
Thanks so much, dear Joanna.💕
Love, love, love this piece, Grace!
So happy to hear that . Thank you.💕
Very welcome.😊
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The last time i saw a path like that it was blocked. How you managed to clear it is a miracle.
The sharp contrast to the poem i wrote and this achievement is so vast.
Just trying to give you a unique, insightful comments. Hopefully you enjoy it as much as i enjoy your poetry.
Thank you. Glad you liked it.💕
wonderful lifting poetry Grace as I’m bouncing on my trampoline! Lovely imagery! 💖👏👏👏
Bounce away, dear friend .💕
thanks for the reminder.. gotta leave this chair.. ha💖
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Love this, Grace. The imagery is vivid and effervescant. Thank you!
So nice to hear. Thanks so much.💕
Amazing, I’d love to make my flat dream and jump to the trampoline 🥰
Thanks so much. Sounds fun.💕💕
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A gorgeous poem, with an epic ending line. Loved it, Grace. 💞
So glad to hear you loved it, my friend . Thank you so much.💕
You’re most welcome, Grace. Always. 💞
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It was a beautiful poem, we all should have lively dreams.
Thanks so much.💕
This is a beautiful read. Inner joynis very key and marvelous to exploit. 🌺
Thanks so much, dear friend. So happy you liked it.💕
Yes I did. Feel most welcome, my dear friend. 😘
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What a lovely poem Grace. I loved the last line about making this dream a trampoline and jump high from it. Thanks for joining in
So happy you liked it, Sadje. Thanks so much. My pleasure.💕
You’re most welcome
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Your poems are always so creative and beautiful, dear Grace. The way you rhyme the verses adds such a beautiful rhythm to it. Loved it!!💞💞
I’m so happy you liked it. Thank you.💕
Your trampoline also made me smile, 😊
Happy to hear that. Thanks so much.💕
Wow! What a positivity! Loved the inspiration in its every line. Well penned, Grace 👍💖
Happy you enjoyed it, dear KK. Thanks so much.💕
You’re welcome always 😊
How inspiring Grace!
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Thanks so much, dear Marie.💕
This is a beautiful poem
So happy you liked it . Thank you 💕
You are welcome
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Yes, that’s so true! Very wise.
Glad you liked it.💕
It was wonderful!
Thank you.💕
Love this 💞
Happy to hear that. Thanks so much.💕
Incredible words💕
Thanks so much, Laiba.💕
Welcome❤
Awwww Grace this was full of sunshine! Absolutely loved this feel good poem
So happy to hear that. Thanks so much.💕