Looking for excuses,
excuses for your lies.
Lies often reduces,
reduces all strong ties.
Ties bring our hearts closer,
closer every night.
Nights provide exposure,
exposure to pure light.
Light shines through your spirit,
spirit sparks the soul.
Soul without a limit,
limitless and whole.
Whole and fully complete,
complete true self brings love,
love sincerely released,
released from up above.
– Grace Y. Estevez – Reddy
Love the repetition of key words. Very nice, Grace!
I’m so happy you liked it, Liz. Thank you.💕
Such a beautiful poem with Honesty leading the way Grace!
Thanks so much, dear Cindy. Glad you enjoyed , my friend.💕
Thank you, Grace.
Thanks so much, Joanna.💕
A gorgeous poem, dear Grace. I love it. 💞
Thanks so much, my friend .💕
You’re most welcome, Grace. Always. 💞
I love it!!
Happy you enjoyed. Thanks so much.💕
Yes, the ‘word thread’ moves your theme along splendidly!. Cool!
Thanks so much. I am so glad you liked it.💕
“Lies…reduces all strong ties”…
Ties between great friends, lovers, boss and employee…
The poetic mastery displayed in this poem is impressive. I sense it in the way repetitions occur in the poem.
I look forward to a day when just by looking at a poem published elsewhere without title nor author, one can easily tell that Grace wrote this. I feel like she’s getting there.
That’s so kind of you, Benjamin. I truly appreciate your sweet response. It means a lot to me. I can honestly tell you that I sense greatness for you. Thank you so much💕
Thanks for your kind words. C’est gentil. I feel encouraged.
And you are always welcome.
Love this poem Grace.
I’m so happy to hear that, Sadje. Thanks so much.💕
You’re always welcome my friend
Love this one. Clever and beautiful.❤
So glad you enjoyed it. Thanks so much .💕
The flow here is so marvellous. So smoothing and beautiful!💕💕
Many thanks. So happy you enjoyed.💕
Wonderful post. The words fully describe how much honesty is important in every relation💕
So glad you liked it, Laiba. Thanks so much.💕
Ohh Grace, this is so beautiful… Loved the style 💕💞
So happy you enjoyed, Lirti. Thanks so much.💕
My pleasure 💕
Wow! So beautiful! An amazing chain of thoughts! Well penned, Grace 💖💐
Delighted to hear you enjoyed it, KK. Thank you 💕
You’re always welcome 😊
Glad you liked it. Thanks you.💕
I sure did. You have a wonderful way with words, Grace.
How true this is! Indeed, honesty is the best policy. Look at this: “…complete true self brings love, love sincerely released, released from up above.” That is one of the best things I’ve read today. Marvelous, my dear friend. ❤
I am so happy to read your response, my friend. Thank you so very much.💕💕💕
Glad you are. Feel most welcome ❤