Vibrating loops,
targets a group,
entangles truths,
ignore all proof.
Floating around,
intrusive sound,
ego echoes,
runs silent show.
Voices replay,
words whispers say,
swims around brain,
to create pain.
Cover both ears,
avoid sad tears,
keep lips so shut,
judgements can cut.
Vibrating loops,
energies swoop,
blind aware eyes,
assumptions fly.
Strong focused mind,
remain so kind,
starve the unfair,
choose not to care.
Let it all go,
heart starts to glow,
sentences slide,
facts do not hide.
Sounds loud and pure,
miracle cure,
balanced within,
quietly grin.
– Grace Y. Estevez – Reddy
Written for FFFC #204 hosted by Fandango
Beautifully written! I like how your poems always have such great rhyming words. I also loved the message in the poem. 😊💕
Thank you so much, Anjali. Happy you enjoyed. Truly means a lot to me.💕
My pleasure 😊
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Grinnnnnnnn
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Well penned Grace!! There is a cycle to gossip that does “entangle.” Love the musical vibe to gave to the verses and your skill with select repitition:
– vibrating loops” “sounds” whispers, “silent” “echoes” …marvelous take on the prompt!!
Oops that should read: vibe “: gave to the verses”
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Thank you so much. Happy you liked it. I love how you pay such good attention to the details, Suzette. Thanks so much for that, my friend.💕
I enjoy how you craft meaning in your poetry.
Happy to hear that, my friend.💕💕💕
You are most welcome Grace.
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I agree with these words of Suzette’s, Grace… That’s how I feel when I read your pieces too <3
~David
So happy to hear that, David. Thank you so much.💕
Great poem Grace. It seems like gossip is the hot topic for the day! So many have gotten trapped and burned by those who have “diarrhea of the mouth!” UGH!!! 😝
Thanks so much. Yes. I noticed that too. Thankfully mine was inspired by the prompt and not an actual situation. I truly detest gossip, unless it’s celebrity gossip.🤣🤣🤣
Girl Grace you are too funny! Thanks so much for the chuckles my friend. 😂😝🤣
Thank you, Kym.💕🤣💕
You’re welcome Grace! 🤩💖😘
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Thank you for writing this poem. Gossip is a horrible thing that affects everyone.
Absolutely. Thanks so much 💕
Gossip is evil. Thanks for participating!
I couldn’t agree more. My pleasure 💕
The gossip here is you’re the hit of the town and spread love around and send our hearts aglow Grace! Love it my friend! ❣️
Yayyyyy. That’s the kinda gossip I would love. Thank you so much, my dear friend. You’re awesome.💕🙏💕
Meee too!!❣️. You’re so welcome Grace. Awww thanks and so are you! 💗
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Oh how many a slander and gossip destroyed. The power of the tongue! Wisdom ❤
So true. Thanks so much.💕
Love your poem, especially the last two lines.
Happy you enjoyed it, Sadje. Thanks so much 💕
You’re most welcome
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👏👌Superb Grace…
Thanks so much, Destiny 💕
Most welcome…
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Great rhythm and word choices Grace 🙂
Thank you so much, Angela.💕
Gossip is an insidious, invasive beast! May we surround ourselves with others of strong minds and remain balanced within. 💞💞💞
Beautiful flow and rhythm, Grace! 💞💞💞
Thank you so much, Dawn.💕
Absolutely. Well said, Dawn. Thank you 💕🙏💕
Beautiful!
Thank you 💕🙏💕
Whatever may be the gossips….facts do not hide. So well penned, Grace! Love its composition 👍❤️
Absolutely. Thanks so much, dear KK.💕
You’re welcome always 😊
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Gossip is the worse!
Absolutely 💕
Love the rythm and the wisdom of your poem Grace!
Goosip can make so much damage
Well done and penned 💕
Thank you so much, Marie. I absolutely agree.💕
That last stanza ties everything together so exquisitely. Beautifully crafted as always, dear Grace. I love the wisdom behind your poetic talent, they work together so perfectly 🤍🤍🤍
Thank you so much, dear Grace. I’m so glad you enjoyed it, my friend. Always appreciate your kind support.💕🙏💕
Facts do not hide. Yes, truth prevails despite the effort to drown it.
Absolutely . Thanks so much.💕
There is a powerful message here, and it has great rhyme and rhythm! I love it!❤️
Thanks so much, dear Aaysid. So happy you enjoyed it 💕
Wonderful. Love this one, dear Grace. 💞
Thank you so much, dear friend. Happy you enjoyed it.💕
You’re welcome, my friend. Always. 💞
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Beautiful
Thanks so much 💕
Wow, what a powerful piece of poetry! The lines about “vibrating loops” and “intrusive sound” really hit home for me. It’s so true that our thoughts can play such a big role in shaping our emotions and well-being. The advice to “cover both ears” and cultivate a “strong focused mind” is spot on. It’s a great reminder to be mindful of our thoughts and to work towards finding peace and positivity in our lives. I feel so inspired after reading this!
Im so happy you enjoyed it. Gossip can be so toxic. Thank you so much. Have a wonderful day.💕
I love this
Thanks so much.💕
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Please, Can we team for a poem
That’s so sweet. I would love to but unfortunately right now, my schedule won’t permit for me to do collaborations. I will definitely reach out to you once my schedule clears up a bit.💕🙏💕
Thanks a lot dear
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Mail me when you’re free 😘😘