Lick the envelope,
bid you a farewell.
Melancholy smiles
mute the words I yell.
Holding the letter
that carries my thoughts.
Logic in answers,
yet feeling distraught.
Handing it over,
receiving my own.
Thankful for moments
with lessons now known.
Taking unpaved paths,
detached and set free.
Leaving your presence,
returning to me.
Reading this letter
helps me realize.
My ultimate peace,
is the valued prize.
Goodbye and farewell,
hope life grants you ease.
May you find your way,
flowing with the breeze.
– Grace Y. Estevez-Reddy
This is so deeply beautiful, my dear Grace!!!! I absolutely love it and totally relate…you described all the feelings of saying goodbye so perfectly, vividly and with a super-Grace touch!!! The flow and rhyming is just fabulous too!!! Spectacular writing, my lovely friend! Canβt wait to see what you whip up next π€π€π€
Iβm so happy you liked it. Thank you so much, Ace. Your kind and supportive words are truly so motivating.I appreciate you, my dear friend.πππ
I love the rhythm and the rhyming. This is moving, touching, and deeply felt. Well done. Itβs nice to meet you. Thanks for stopping my my page.
Thank you so much, Tammy. Nice to meet you too. So nice to hear you liked it.β€οΈ
shared it on my blog
Lovely, lovely. Peace, indeed. πβ€
Thanks so much ,Jeff..πππ
beautiful message that flowed so well like always Graceπ
Thatβs so very nice of you to say Cindy. Thank you.πππ
You write good stuff… I applaud.. β£οΈ
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Subtle yet noble, i liked the flow, till the end. I had just to read it twice,π₯³π₯³π―
Thanks so much, Joweda.πππ
You’re most welcome Grace ππ
Parting is always sad, but you have beautifully described. Loved it. Well done.
Thank you, KK. I truly appreciate your thoughtful feedback.π
Wowww..! Marvelous post my friend..!βΊοΈπ€
So glad you liked it. Thank you.β€οΈ
Most welcome..!
A lovely piece on goodbyes! Loved it, Grace. Stay blessed β€οΈπ»π·π€
Much appreciated, my friend.Thanks so much.πππ