Sailing through the desert,
thirsty for a change.
Searching for an answer
to this twisted game.
Listening to whispers,
carried by the breeze,
chanting words of wisdom
directed at me.
Releasing resentments,
as I am advised.
All emotions fly free
and lessons are prized.
Fallen tears from my eyes
bring thunder and rain.
Absolving past blames
while dissolving pain.
I no longer feel parched,
hydrated at last.
Sailing slowly through life,
my voids fill up fast.
– Grace Y. Estevez-Reddy
Wow Grace, Iām running out of words to express just how much I love your beautiful writing!!! This one is magical, you always do a remarkable job of powerfully describing emotion! Well done as always, my friend š¤š¤āØ
Thank you so much Ace. Truly appreciate your kind words my friend.ā¤ļøš
Beautiful rhyming lines !!
Thank you so much KK.šā¤ļøš
Forgiveness. Something we must do. Can be difficult dear Grace. A wonderful poem shared.
Thank you my friend. I absolutely agree, forgiveness is very difficult, but feels so much better once given.ā¤ļø
Simple diction with loads of emotions and flowing piece.
Absolutely beautiful pen you got,
I just love it šā¤ļø
Thanks so much Joweda.ā¤ļøššš
Most welcome Graceā¤ļøš