Complete

Entwined in what I feel for you.
exhausted tears, forbidden fruit.

What should I do? no sign or clue,
divide our stakes to live as two?

If love walks by, this life turns blue,
swallow this thought as the main cue.

A painted frame, shiny and new.
we did not stall, instead, we grew.

Expand the dreams our actions drew,
I know you well, feel your heart too.

Entangled wings with which we flew,
connections make emotions brew.

Filling our minds with pretty views,
Strongest of bonds, adhesive glue.

Search your bright eyes, instantly knew,
forever mine, forever so true.

– Grace Y. Estevez – Reddy

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  1. hmmm… Second stanza, asking questions of someone other than you stated in first. Nice! Third stanza changes view on the poem shifting away from the introductory tears, moving the poem to the direction of how you are entwined in what you feel. Hitting home knowing it’s true. hmm…then the tears must be of joy. That’s how I read it. Nicely done.

  2. Grace, it always makes me smile twice when you tap ‘like’ for one of my Haiku. The first smile is one of pride that my words had some meaning; the second time is from reading some more of your work.
    Thankyou
    DD

  3. Very well expressed, Grace! You can feel the anticipation and love with every word. “Entangled wings with which we flew,” really stood out for me. Beautifully written! πŸ’žπŸ’žπŸ’ž

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