Entwined in what I feel for you.
eyes swollen shut, forbidden fruit.
Expand the thoughts that you withdrew,
I know you well, feel your heart too.
What should I do? no sign or cue,
go separate ways to live as two?
If not this life then life turns blue,
swallow this thought as the main clue.
A painted frame, shiny and new.
we did not stall, instead, we grew.
Entangled wings with which we flew,
connections make emotions brew.
Filling our eyes with pretty views,
Strongest of bonds, adhesive glue.
Looked in your eye, instantly knew
forever mine, feeling so true.
– Grace Y. Estevez-Reddy
Oh. My. God. This is so so good! There are so many lines I could pick as my favorite, but there all so amazing!!! Your rhyming makes it even more stunning! And that ending…literal perfection! Well done as always, my friend 🖤🤗
That is so sweet of you to say Ace! Thank you so much. Reading your words truly warms my heart. Love and light to you my friend.❤️
Aww of course!! 🤗🤗🖤
Fantastic! I love this, Grace.
-David
Thank you David.So happy you enjoyed it.❤️