Entwined in what I feel for you.
exhausted tears, forbidden fruit.
What should I do? no sign or clue,
divide our stakes to live as two?
If love walks by, this life turns blue,
swallow this thought as the main cue.
A painted frame, shiny and new.
we did not stall, instead, we grew.
Expand the dreams our actions drew,
I know you well, feel your heart too.
Entangled wings with which we flew,
connections make emotions brew.
Filling our minds with pretty views,
Strongest of bonds, adhesive glue.
Search your bright eyes, instantly knew,
forever mine, forever so true.
– Grace Y. Estevez – Reddy
lovely ❤🌷
Thanks so much 💕
hmmm… Second stanza, asking questions of someone other than you stated in first. Nice! Third stanza changes view on the poem shifting away from the introductory tears, moving the poem to the direction of how you are entwined in what you feel. Hitting home knowing it’s true. hmm…then the tears must be of joy. That’s how I read it. Nicely done.
Im so happy you enjoyed it. Thank you so much.💕
Oh wow!!! This is love love love 💗
Thanks so much, Belladonna.💕
Beautiful poem, dear Grace. 💞
Thank you so much, Jeff.💕
You’re welcome, Grace. Always. 💞
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Beautiful love story! I enjoyed the imagery especially: “Strongest of bonds, adhesive glue.”
Thanks so much, Suzette. Truly appreciate it .💕🙏💕
Always a pleasure💞
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Beautiful poem Grace.
Thanks so much, Sadje.💕
You’re most welcome
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Beautiful
Thanks so much.💕
Grace, it always makes me smile twice when you tap ‘like’ for one of my Haiku. The first smile is one of pride that my words had some meaning; the second time is from reading some more of your work.
Thankyou
DD
That’s so nice to hear. Thank you so much.💕
Love 😍♥️
Beautifully written
Thanks so much 💕
My pleasure 😊
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So lovely and so rhythmic! Loved the imagery! Well penned Grace, as always 😊💖
Im so glad you enjoyed it. Thank you so much.💕
You’re always welcome, Grace 💖
Beautiful love poem.
Glad you enjoyed it, Nicole. Thank you.💕
Beautiful lines Grace! you are amazing my friend❣️
So kind of you, dear Cindy. Thank you so much.💕
Oh wow, how beautifully you’ve written this piece, my friend…love the depth & the flow ✨❤️💫
So happy you enjoyed, my friend. Thank you 💕
You’re welcome, my dear friend ✨💟💫
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Heey I love this one😍
Thanks so much 💕
Very well expressed, Grace! You can feel the anticipation and love with every word. “Entangled wings with which we flew,” really stood out for me. Beautifully written! 💞💞💞
So glad you enjoyed it, dear Dawn. Thanks so much.💕
Oh Grace! I’ve missed your sweet poetry, dear. But thank God I’m finally back. This is awesome to read, as always. 🌺
Thank you so much, dear Lamittan. So happy you are back, my friend.💕
You’re most welcome, dear Grace. Glad to meet you too again.
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Sometimes we love those are not meant to be forever with us. We have to wait for them to be ours💝❤.Great words❤
So true.💕
Yup💓