Be Receptive

Twinkle, twinkle, little star,
Do you know how loved you are?
Though heartbeats feel far away,
and dark nights outshine bright days.

There’s a light you cannot see,
once it burns it never flees.
Sadness whispers, “You’re alone”,
with connections firmly sewn.

Twinkle, twinkle, little star,
inner lies, can stretch too far.
Heavy weights are gifts of fear,
so perceptions seem unclear.

All the doubts that cloud blue skies,
is a trick behind hurt eyes.
Although most are unaware,
someone out there always cares.

Twinkle, twinkle, little star,
terminate imagined scars,
Breathe joy in, and let it stay,
till deep sorrows drift away.

Faith held through happier days.
still sparkle in countless ways.
True grace can not die, it sleeps,
love surrounds you, ever deep.

– Grace Y. Estevez – Reddy

Response to Sadje’s picture prompt on What Do You See # 285 May 05, 2025

This weeks prompt offered two picture options. This poem was inspired by both pictures. 💕

41 thoughts on “Be Receptive

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  1. I really enjoy the hope in your poetry Grace!

    “True grace can not die, it sleeps,
    love surrounds you, ever deep.”

    💛

  2. Awww the beauty of your brilliance n the positive power in your words always delightful read dear Grace. Loved it my friend ♥️♥️♥️

  3. This is so beautiful 🌞
    I probably needed to hear
    “Twinkle, twinkle, little star,
    terminate imagined scars,
    Breathe joy in, and let it stay,
    till deep sorrows drift away.”

  4. You have rewritten “Twinkle, twinkle, little star” afresh, and I loved its beauty and positivity. I forgot the old one😊 Well done, Grace 👏👏💗

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