Take me away, beam me up high,
twinkling showers circle the skies.
Off to a place, where nothing dies,
stars dance around, spin and baptize.
Take me somewhere, where I come first,
away from here, quench this dry thirst.
Plan an escape from what feels cursed,
bring with you faith, so hopes can burst.
Take me inside, lend me your eye,
give me a life, teach me to fly.
Disperse my tears, inhale my sighs,
clear up my pain, help me survive.
– Grace Y. Estevez – Reddy
Response to Sadje’s picture prompt on What do you see #133 May 09, 2022
A beautiful poem Grace. Love it. Thanks for joining in
I am so glad you enjoyed it, Sadje. Thank you so much. Truly my pleasure.π
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Love these lines:
Disperse my tears, inhale my sighs
Beautiful.
Glad you liked it. Thanks so much.π
Nice poem.
Thank you.π
Thank you, Grace.
Joanna
Thanks so much, Joanna.π
Love your light bursting in the worst of storms Grace! πππππ
Breath deeply, gaze into the depths of the night, and you will be where you wish to be.
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Such a feeling of yearning for healing and peace in this. The final two lines are especially powerful to me. Beautiful as always, Grace. π
I am so happy you liked it, Mike. Thank you so much.π
βDisperse my tears, inhale my sighs,
clear up my pain, help me survive.β Magical, are you. A gorgeous write, Grace. π
Thank you so much, dear Jeff.π
Beautiful words and amazing poemβ€Welldone Graceπ
Thanks so much, Laiba.π
My Pleasure Graceπ
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A touching poem with full of love and emotion. Beautifully done, Grace ππ
Thanks so much , KK. Glad you liked it.π
Welcome, always π
Thank you grace for another beautiful piece!
So happy you liked it. Thanks so much.π
This can be done only by ‘God’ or ‘Destiny’!
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Wonderful poem
Thanks so much.π
Such a healing poem. Thank you so much for this, Grace!
That’s so nice to hear. Thank you.π
You’re very welcome.
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Great poem.
Thanks so much, Benjamin.π
Welcome, Grace.
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