The shiny sun
offers a hand,
entices me
into a dance.
The warmest ray
touches my face,
tattoos my skin
fills me with grace.
A happy tune
plays in the breeze,
moving the leaves
on swaying trees.
As wild winds sweep,
whistle and chime,
form perfect beats
that can stop time.
A stage of grass,
song without words,
just sprinkled rain,
and flapping birds.
The moisture dries
mild hues shine bright,
sun fades away
bringing moonlight.
– Grace Y. Estevez- Reddy
Well penned!
Reminds me of those good times in the park. Crowed to look into. Fewer worries & more enjoyment. Running towards home in order to avoid those tiny sparkles of rain.
Perfect!
I’m so happy it took you to those fun memories. Thanks so much, Tanishq.💕
Love the imagery!❤
Thanks so much.Aaysid.💕
You are welcome, Grace.❤
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Every single thing about this poem is beyond beautiful, Grace….what an amazing writer you are ✨❤️💫
That is so sweet of you to say, Navin. Thank you so much. I appreciate your kindness.❤️
You’re welcome Grace ✨❤️
Lovely! 💕
Thanks so much, Susan.💕
Ah! I agree with Aaysid; beautiful imagery, conjuring so much beauty, mystery, and love. Just wonderful, Grace. I love this poem. ❤️❤️
So happy to hear that, Jeff. Thanks so much.💕
You’re welcome, Grace. Is always my pleasure. ❤️❤️
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Elements of nature singing and enjoying with a new day ,
Such a nice imagery
Thanks so much. 💕
Wow! Wonderful imaginary! Great words❤
I’m happy you liked it. Thanks so much.❤️
This is beyond beautiful, Grace! I really love it when you use your name somewhere in your poems, it feels a lot more special. Loved it ❤
I’m happy to hear that. I feel lucky to have the kind of name that can easily fall into many poems. Thanks for noticing.I appreciate you.💕🙏💕
You’re so welcome ❤
A poem of high art
Thanks so much.💕
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Wonderful poem! Loved the imagery. Beautiful! 💖
Thanks so much, Sam.💕
This is just beyond incredible, my dear Grace!!! What a stunning piece! The rhyming, the imagery, the soothing flow, the sweet message and the beauty through it all just blows me away. Your words danced in my heart 💫🖤🤗
That’s so nice to hear. Thanks so much, dear Ace.💕
Enjoyed the whole piece, I was particularly drawn in by these verses
“As wild winds sweep,
whistle and chime,
form perfect beats
that can stop time.
A stage of grass,
song without words,
just sprinkled rain,
and flapping birds.”
Rhythm, grace and vivid depiction. Takes talent to do all three at the same time.
Beautifully written Grace.
That’s so nice to hear, O.D. Thank you so much.💕❤️💕
Very welcome Grace ❤️
This poem makes me take a moment and appreciate the beauty of the sun 🙂 Lovely poem.
I appreciate your kind words, Viignesh. Thanks so much.💕
Welcome 🙂
Both imagery and personification are at the best. A very beautiful poem on nature👌👌💐💖
Glad you liked it, KK. Thanks so much.💕
You’re most welcome 😊
What an analogy with your site title and the first two stanzas so beautiful! ❤️
A very hopeful end. Beautifully written! 🌻
Im so happy you liked it. Thanks so very much.💕
Fabulous Grace . . .
Thanks so much.💕
what a beautiful poem to start the day with Grace❣️. thanks my friend❣️
Happy you liked it, Cindy. Thanks so much.💕
You’re so welcome my dear!💖💖
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This was a beautiful piece my dear Grace! Loved it. ❤️🌹🌹
Im so happy you liked it, Diana. Thanks so much. I deeply appreciate it.💕❤️💕
Wonderful and beautiful poem Grace
Thanks so much. So happy you liked it.💕
Wonderful! I’m in quarantine at home but I can feel the sun’s warmth on me with your words. Thanks
And sorry that I used me old blog comment you yesterday. I deleted the old blog and now the compliment is gone to. So sorry for that
No worries at all. Thanks so much for the comment. I truly appreciate your compliment.💕
That’s so nice to hear. Thanks so much.💕
Sorry you are quarantined.Hope you are out and feeling the direct sun soon.💕🙏💕
Vivid and full of life and light. Beautiful
Thank you so much.💕
This is amazing! So beautifully crafted! 🌼🦋
Thanks so much. So happy you liked it.💕
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