Breezy bright day,
days float through time,
time flies and sways,
sways as it climbs.
Climbs over fears,
fears create views,
views of the years,
years that left hues.
Hues alway lasts,
lasts underneath,
underneath vast,
vast memories.
Memories haunt,
haunt to stop cheer,
cheers build a fort,
fort made to clear.
Clears up a path,
path touches skies,
skies without wraths,
wraths say “goodbye”.
Goodbyes allow
a sense of peace,
peace offers vows,
vows fill the breeze.
– Grace Y. Estevez- Reddy
Wonderfully inspiring and depicting so much in minds eye. Xx
Lauren. Thank you. So happy you enjoyed it, my friend .💕
❤️ ❤️ that I did.
Very clever.
Thanks so much .💕
I love the flow. Such a wonderful poem, Grace dear. ❤
So nice to hear, Lamittan. Thanks so much.💕
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ok Grace, that was off the charts cool in delivery and words. Divinely done!
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Yayyyy. I’m glad you liked it, Cindy. Thanks so much for the support, my friend .💕
You’re so welcome and I so did!
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“Goodbyes allow
a sense of peace,
peace offers vows,
vows fill the breeze.” A light to my evening. I love this one, Grace. ❤️
Thank you so much, Jeff. I am so happy to hear you loved it, my friend.💕
So lyrical it could be set to music! This is a really cool format, Grace. Your talent continues to amaze! 🙂
That’s so nice to hear, my friend. Thank you so very much,Mike.💕
This is so beautiful and heartfelt! Loved reading this!🌠
Happy you enjoyed it. Thank you so much.💕
This is done a bit differently, but beautifully. As inspiring as ever. Good one, Grace 👌💐 💖
Thank you so much, KK. Glad you like it.💕
You’re more than welcome 😊
Beautiful one Grace, smooth and serene. Love it❣
So happy to hear that, Suvi. Thanks so much.💕
It’s truly a pleasure 🤗
I like how one line flowed into the next. Quite a lovely poem.
Happy you liked it, KT. Thanks so much.💕
My pleasure!💕