Provocative, Grace. Your site displays the poem before the picture appears so I was expecting a white board with an eraser. But, surprise, it’s an hourglass. A pause for contemplation. Thank you!
Great connection to buried and living at the same time.
Also, I was fascinated by your poem’s title – Brilliant how the title and your poem complement the other.
We are just grains of sand falling through….
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Neat contrast bewtween ‘bright’ and ‘buried’. Line 2 is the perfect turn. Thanks!
Thanks so much.💕
Provocative, Grace. Your site displays the poem before the picture appears so I was expecting a white board with an eraser. But, surprise, it’s an hourglass. A pause for contemplation. Thank you!
I can totally see why you would expect an eraser, hope you liked the hour glass surprise.💕
Great connection to buried and living at the same time.
Also, I was fascinated by your poem’s title – Brilliant how the title and your poem complement the other.
I’m happy to hear that, Suzette. Thanks so much.💕
My pleasure Grace. Happy creating.
Thank you, Suzette.💕
Nice.
Thank you.💕
My pleasure
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Beautiful 🥰
Thank you so much 💕
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So true. Before we know it what once was becomes a thing of the past, making us wonder where did time go?
Sometimes we don’t even get the chance to bring a dream into fruition, just goes to fade into the shadows.
Absolutely. Thanks so much for sharing.💕
This is awesome. I love it
Thanks so much.💕
your title and your haiku a perfect combo.. thought provoking Grace.. love it
Thank you so much, my friend.💕
Amazing how fast that sand is falling…and picking up speed by the minute! 💞💞💞
Yes it is. Super fast. 💕🙏💕
As always, lovely lyrics.
Greetings from afar, Grace.
Thank you so much, dear Lincoln.💕
A gorgeous poem of presence. Wonderful. 💞
Thanks so much, Jeff.💕
You’re welcome, dear Grace. Always. 💞
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A brilliant piece, indeed! Well penned verses 👌💐💖
Thank you so much, dear KK.💕
Most welcome Grace ❤️
nice metaphor in last line, connecting back to the hourglass image.
Glad you liked it. Thank you 💕
Seems like time is “the eraser.”
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