Open the door,
travel through time,
adventures roar,
echo and chime.
always want more,
to feel sublime,
wishes all soar,
when faith is prime.
Travel the past,
What could be changed?
shifts and contrast,
are rearranged,
flies by so fast,
throughout each stage,
emotions last,
after they age.
Tomorrow comes.
What will it bring?
Infinite glum?
or blooming spring?
Pick up the crumbs,
moments that bling,
yesterday drums,
the future sings.
The moment nears,
capture it now.
Release old fears,
they fall and bow.
Joyful tears cheer,
take a true vow.
Bright days appear,
if thoughts allow.
– Grace Y. Estevez – Reddy
Thank you, Grace.
Joanna
Thanks so much, Joanna.π
Beautiful as Always πβ€π«
Thanks so muchπ
I enjoy the way the rhyme and rhythm work here. Sonorous composing.
Thank you so very much.πππ
Lovely rhyme here– very melodic!
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You make it sound so enchanting
Thanks so much.π
Beautiful as always
I really enjoyed this masterpiece. Your work is not only amazing but beautiful.
So glad you liked it. Thank you so very much.π
I loved it. You are very gifted.
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Enchanting happenings, indeed. Beautifully crafted. Just like a rhythmic clock.
So kind of you. Thanks so much.π
You’re very welcome. Thank you for sharing!
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A sweet piece for reflection! π
Thank you.π
I appreciate the positive, hopeful message about the future in this poem:)
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I love how you end your poems on a high note.
Thanks so much , Sadje.π
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Beautiful and encouraging β€οΈ
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Enjoyed this very much
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Life is beautiful so forget sorrow and welcome the new beginning ! Beautiful rhythms! π
Thanks so much, Priti.π
Welcome π God bless you π
Blessings to you too.π
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Last stanza I’d full of hope and inspiration. A well crafted piece, Grace, once again πππ
Thanks so much, my friend.π
Most welcome π
It’s so much fun when we are on that wonderful run of the sublime which you penned so brilliantly and reminded us to stay the course through these great lines when things take a turn.πππ
“Release old fears,
they fall and bow.
Joyful tears cheer,
take a true vow.
I’m so happy you liked it, Cindy. Thanks for your wonderful support my dear friend .π
You’re so welcome Grace! π
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βPick up the crumbs,
moments that bling,
yesterday drums,
the future sings.β Wonderful, Grace. I adore this poem. π
So happy you enjoyed it, my friend. Thanks so much.π
Bright days appear , if thoughts allow. A true inspiring message β€
So true. Thanks so much.π
My pleasure Graceπ
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That last stanza, though… Wow. What an effortless flow here, and wisdom a-plenty. Thank you, Grace! π
Glad you enjoyed, my friend. Thanks so much.π
Love it and the meaning!
Happy to hear that. Thank you.π