Twirl around
dreams come and go,
lingered sounds
the same old tones.
Feathered thoughts
flow with the breeze.
Dreams are lost
like misplaced keys.
Years pass by
moments are gone,
hopes are sighs
each day a yawn.
Count rain drops
assign a wish,
heart soon hops
a joyful switch.
Paint a smile
till it is real,
feel love pile
absorb and heal.
Every pore
fills with white light,
dreams explore
as life turns bright.
– Grace Y. Estevez- Reddy
Oh those misplaced keys; what an amazing image for these dreams.
Thanks, K. πIt usually happens when I am running late.π€£
Agreed, easily my favourite line out of this poem! πβ€οΈππ
Thank you.π
Beautiful and uplifting my dear friend! ππ
Thanks so much, my dear friend.ππ₯°π
You’re so welcome! ππ
ALWAYS!! ππ
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Adore the rhythm, rhyme, and flow of this one, Grace. Is beautiful. π
So happy to hear that, my dear friend. Thank you so very much. It truly means a lot to me.π
Youβre most welcome, Grace. Always. π
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A beautiful composition emanating such positive vibes, Grace β€οΈ
Thank you so very much , Radhika.πππ
This is such a mesmerising poem! Heartfelt and beautiful! Love itβ€β€
Happy you enjoyed it. Thanks so much.π
Wonderful in every way! You write poetry well, my friend Grace. π
Thanks so much, my dear friend.So happy you liked it.π
Sure I do. Feel most welcome, dear.
Counting rain drops is a joyful switch. One more uplifting poem from you, Grace ππ
Thanks so much, KK.π
Most welcome, Grace π
Grace, you wrote this gracefully!!β€β€
Loved itπ
Thanks so much, dear Aayushi. Truly appreciate it .π
You’re always welcome, Grace!β€β€
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Beautiful write up, Grace. I adore itπ₯°
Thank you , Suvi.So happy you enjoyed it.πππ
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Airy and uplifting, and I loved the line about counting rain drops. Such cool imagery! π
So glad you liked it. Thank you.πππ
Hello dear Grace. I loved your work today. This poem was my favorite.
Hi John. I’m so happy you liked it. Thanks so much.ππ
You are welcome dear Grace.