Feel so flushed also displaced,
loose control of my own space,
slowly shift, balance my weight.
hear all emotions debate.
My face falls fast on the ground,
nervously I look around,
can not help but to stare down,
anxious smile becomes a frown.
So embarrassed, forced to see,
what your mind must think of me,
look at you to quickly find,
all the doubts I hold inside.
The floor transforms to quicksand,
suddenly notice your hand,
showing me you understand,
ease my tremble, love expands.
Sweat beads swiftly spread throughout,
water moistens my dry mouth.
Inner strength appears to sprout,
confidence chases all doubts.
Stable forces grasp my feet,
with no room left for defeat.
Stand so solid on concrete,
self assured, whole and complete.
– Grace Y. Estevez – Reddy
Classically beautiful words stiched together. Like a beautiful woven dress.
I like the words so deep, meaningful, brings out the best version of you.
I can hardly find the words to describe your brilliance in every sence in beautiful sentences.
Bravo🎉🥂
Thanks so much, my dear friend. Thrilled to hear you liked it.💕🙏💕
Wonderful💕🙂
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My face falls flat on the ground,
nervously I look around,📌
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These are relatable feelings expressed vividly. Great piece 😊
Thanks so much, Kristen.💕
My pleasure! 💕
Amazing real emotions expressive of personal experiences.
Thanks so much, Suzette.💕
A pleasure Grace 😊
Beautiful 🥰❤️
Thank you 💕
Lovely
Thank you 💕
You are welcome, my good friend.
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“Feel so flushed also displaced,
loose control of my own space,
slowly shift, balance my weight.
hear all emotions debate.”
This!! 👆👆👍👍❤️❤️
Thanks so much 💕🙏💕
Wonderful💕🙂
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This is lovely. I feel the reading easing from soft landing to firm concrete foundation rest. Brilliant transition. Worthy of printing to the warmth of a heart.
I am so happy you enjoyed it. Thank you so much.💕
Lovely❤
Thank you💕
Welcome❤
Awesome recovery!
Thanks so much, Sadje 💕
My pleasure
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love the imagery and support Grace.. at first i thought oh no, I hope she doesn’t have covid!
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Lol. This one was inspired by a friend of my daughter’s. Thanks so much for your kindness and support, my friend. Truly appreciate you.💕🥰💕
Awww, very relatable. Another brilliant piece, Grace.
Thanks so much, Joyce 💕
Of course, Grace!
Grace, Grace, Grace… Your thoughts are so deep for such a young lady. I think you are an old soul with deep reflections on life. Family name “Estevez ? Habla espanol Grace ? Yo hablo espanol pero yo hablo poquito espanol para cinco anyos. Yo vivo in California mucho anyos, pero ahora yo vivo in Polynesie Francaise.
Yo trabajo con much Latinos y Latinas para mucho anyos. Sensitive people like yourself are sometimes in depression. I speak from experience. Strive to be happy. The whole world and your future is in front of you. Your talent of writing and poetry can take you anywhere. Run at the future.
Your future looks quite bright to me. Don’t worry, Be happy Grace. You deserve it.
su amigo,
marcos
Thanks so much, Marcos. Truly appreciate your kindness and encouragement. I am pretty happy with my life. The subjects I choose to write about are sometimes personal and often times triggered by outside sources. I am also not as young as you may think, though I do take that as a compliment, my friend.💕
Si yo hablo español. Muchísimas gracias por su mensaje, cariño, y atención. Te envío muchas bendiciones.💕
Love does expand through understanding. Gorgeous poem, Grace. Love it. 💞
Thanks so much, Jeff. Glad you enjoyed.💕🙏💕
You’re welcome, Grace. It’s always my pleasure. 💞🙏💞
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YO ENVIO MUCHAS BENDICIONES PARA TE TAMBIEN….MI AMIGA !
MARCOS de la isles.
Gracias Marcos 💕🙏💕
It’s amazing how you gather your inspiration and always come up with these perfect rhymes that have a great flow. You must be very experienced to attain this level of perfection.
That’s so nice to hear. Thank you so much. Glad you liked it.💕
Absolutely wonderful.. so rich with emotions 💕
So happy you enjoyed it . Thanks so much.💕
You’re welcome always 💕
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I could feel every emotion. Well done Grace.
So nice to hear, Belladonna. Thank you 💕
You’re welcome!
look at you to quickly find,
all the doubts I hold inside…I feel love and emotion here. Well penned, Grace 👍💖💐
Thanks so much, dear KK. I’m really happy you liked it.💕
Always a pleasure, Grace 💖
“hear all emotions debate” – – love this line! 💜
Glad you liked it. Thanks so much 💕
Beautiful, the shift of poem as one finds strength is commendable. It’s subtle and gentle, making the reader feel that he heard someones innermost thoughts chanted beautifully and in love. 😊
Thank you so much. Love reading your thoughtful response. Truly appreciate it .💕