A prolonged time
that sailed along,
reciting lines
in a mute song.
Extended time
that held too tight
ignoring signs,
hopes fly like kites.
Repeated time
revolving tune,
essence that forms
a warm cocoon.
An evolved time
clearing mistakes,
provide heartaches
with needed breaks.
Infinite time
learns to abide,
control the speed,
that you provide.
– Grace Y. Estevez-Reddy
Bring the rhythm!
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Wow wow wow!!! This is amazing! I especially love that 3rd stanza. Your writing is always so incredible and I always look forward to your posts!!! Keep shining and inspiring, my friend 🖤✨🤗
Thanks so much for all of your support Ace. Your kind words warm my heart and make smile. You are truly appreciated.❤️
Enjoyed the image of the extended time like kites., as it seems I’m flying about that way right now. So many great ideas in this poem.
Thank you so much. I’m so happy you liked it.❤️
just beautiful and a wonderfully sustained rhythm that rocks you as you read!
Thank you so much Kizitovalentine.I am happy to hear you enjoyed.❤️
Very beautiful ❤🌹
Thanks so much.❤️💕
You’re very welcome
This is so meaningful & beautiful.. thank you😀🧡..also a big welcome to my blog family hope you enjoy my post & they help in some way on your journey to enlightenment..it is much appreciated in Grace.& Honour..GG
Thank you GG.I am truly enjoying your amazing posts.Glad you like this poem and hope you enjoy many more.❤️💕