Never thought this is, what would be,
reflections stare right back at me,
to challenge what my blurred eyes see,
old encaged thoughts drift to fly free.
My hot blood flows like windy seas,
with pressure of a narrow stream,
present times erase all past dreams,
hopes choke on muffled barks and screams.
Tomorrow’s goals roam to then flee,
too tired to chase after keys,
the future never guarantees,
today holds what blank minds foresee.
Thoughts of a bone ignites pure glee,
energy guides where bright steps lead,
mirrored paths dig up hopeful seeds,
a sense of pride produce sweat beads.
Inner rewards provide great peace,
happiness flows with serene ease,
sit still like a wise ancient tree,
feel my tail dance within the breeze.
Footsteps arrive so suddenly,
to bring treats and rub my belly,
blissful daydreams buzz like a bee,
to paint bright possibilities.
– Grace Y. Estevez – Reddy
Response to Sadje’s picture prompt on What Do You See # 213 November 20 , 2023

Well done Grace. A stirring take on the prompt. The second verse is deeply poignant. One of my many favorite lines is: ‘Thoughts of a bone ignites pure glee,
Thanks so much, Suzette. I thought that line would be funny from a dogs perspective.🤣💕🙏💕
You did very well translating the dog’s point of view. Awesome!!
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I love that this is from the pup’s pov.
Happy you liked it, Nicole . Thank you.💕
This is so lovely Grace. You’ve given us a glimpse into a dog’s mind. Thanks for joining in.
Thanks so much. Truly my pleasure.💕
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Really wonderful, Grace
Thank you so much.💕
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oh I love this Grace. Such a wonderful take on the prompt of our BFF.s❣️
Happy you enjoyed it, my friend. Thank you 💕
A beautiful reflection on this prompt Grace! I always imagined what dogs think! Cheers! 🐶🤔💖
Thanks so much, Kym. I watch these dogs and wonder too. Cheers, my friend.💕
Love that Grace and you are so very welcome my dear! 🤗💖🥰
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This is such a wonderful response Grace💞
I imagine these are exactly the inner thoughts of a dog 🤗
Brilliant !
Thanks so much💕🙏💕
Always a pleasure to read your words Grace 🥰🌹
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A lovely piece Grace 🙌🐶
Thanks so much 💕
I love enjoying your verses, friend Grace. 🤗🤗
Thank you so much, my friend 💕
Like your response to Sadji’s picture prompt!
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Lovely imagery, Grace! I liked..My hot blood flows like windy seas…A well thought poem! Love it ❤️💐
Thank you so much, my friend. Happy you enjoyed.💕
You’re welcome always 💕
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Beautiful take on the prompt, Grace! Our furbabies are so special to us. 💕
Thank you so much. Yes, they sure are.💕
My pleasure, Grace.
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Beautiful 🤩 🖤🧡
Thanks so much 💕
So well composed Grace! I love the dance from the struggle to the joy!!! 🤩
Glad you enjoyed it, my friend. Thank you.💕
I did indeed. You’re so very welcome, dearest💕💕
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Grace this is so well written.
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You’re welcome!
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You always have the way with words!
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very creative and moving. appreciate you. peace
Thank you so much 💕
Excellent use of personification, Grace 😀
Much love,
David
Thank you so much, David. Glad you enjoyed.💕🙏💕