Lightning bumps into thunder,
raindrops disturbs deep slumber.
False illusions dance to pain,
dreams of memories remain.
Feel so shaken, drenched in sweat,
try to steady panicked breath,
body sleeps, soul wide awake,
solid visions seem so fake.
Sparks of passion, wrapped in beams,
unchain everlasting screams.
Gain control, no other choice,
hear vibrations guide dull voice.
Faith lights up an unsure mind,
stirs up hope, once hard to find.
Sprinkles warmth in fearful hearts,
so this moment marks the start.
New blank canvas fills the brain,
pure and white without a stain.
Imagination holds ink,
revelations help days sync.
Insecurities surrender,
inspired by gleeful splendor,
tears and canvas quickly dry,
so wishes could promptly fly.
– Grace Y. Estevez – Reddy
Moonwashed Weekly Challenge #128 – January 31, 2023
Prompt – Revelation

Overcoming those dark nights of the soul and finding that “a new blank canvas fills the brain…without stain” rewrites the past with victory. Beautifully penned, Grace. Thank you!
Yes, rewrites are so promising , my friend. Thank you so much, Suzette. Have a beautiful weekend.💕
Indeed! Thank you, Grace. And a beautiful weekend to you!
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Beautiful ❤️
Thanks so much💕
You are welcome. Your name inspired my recent poem… grace of the sun…..I hope you liked it….I’d love to know you better….if you do not mind, may I have your contact information please?
That’s so nice to hear. Love it.💕
What a endearing poem surrounding the theme of revelation Grace. Awesome composition my friend. 😊💖😘
Thank you so much, my friend. So happy you enjoyed it.💕
Oh yes I did enjoy it Grace, and you are so very welcome my sweet friend. Enjoy your weekend. 😘💖😊🌟🌞
Thank you, you too.💕🙏💕
Beautiful opening lines drew me to your poem. Splendid write. 🙂
Thank you so much 💕
“Body sleeps, soul wide awake,
solid visions seem so fake”
That’s my story, lol!!!
Loved the poem💕💕
Sorry to hear that. Thanks so much 💕
That’s fine. You’re welcome!! 😊
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Existential lyrics, essential for everyday life.
As always a pleasure to read you, friend Grace.
Thank you so much, dear Lincoln 💕
Such a beautiful poem as we rise again always and always Grace. I love your sentiments and lines in your masterful poetry! 💞
Absolutely, my friend. Thank you so much, Cindy. Happy you enjoyed it.💕
You’re so welcome always Grace!!1 💘
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Such a lovely poem encouraging us to embrace a new blank canvas and move forward to fulfill our dreams. 💖
Thank you so much, Eugenia. Glad you enjoyed it.💕
My pleasure, Grace!
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You are so gifted.
So sweet of you, Nicole. Thanks so much.💕
Beautifully written Grace.
Thanks so much, Sadje.💕
My pleasure
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Another fantastic poetry piece keep up the amazing work my friend I love it it’s inspiring!!!
Thank you so much💕
Truly beautiful poetry, Grace.
Thanks so much💕
Beautifully written Grace 💞
Thank you so much.💕
Faith lights up an unsure mind…so true, it overcomes all fears and doubts. Well done, Grace 👍💖
Glad you liked it, KK. Thank you 💕
My pleasure Grace 💖
I love how your poems end with hope! This is another beautiful poem. ❤️
Happy you enjoyed, Aaysid. Thanks so much.💕
“Imagination holds ink,” I really like this image, imagination painting on the canvas of our minds… 🎨
Happy to hear you enjoyed it. Thank you so much.💕
A gorgeous poem, my friend. 💞
Glad you liked it. Thank you, my friend 💕
You’re welcome, Grace. Always. 💞
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Wow Grace, the flow here is absolutely superb!!!! And I’m in love with the rhyming, just WOW. Excellent piece with a powerful purpose 🤍🤗🤍🤗
Delighted to know you enjoyed it, Grace. Thank you so much, my friend. Truly appreciate you.💕
Your first line is so riveting, Grace…and it just gets better from there! Beautifully written 💞💞💞
Thanks a bunch, my dear friend.💕🙏💕
Love your poem!
Thank you so much 💕
Love this poem!
Thanks so much, Belladonna 💕
You’re welcome 🌸
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Beautiful.
Thank you so much 💕
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