fall upon her head,
ignite dreams that pop,
feed thoughts that were dead.
Takes hold of her soul,
melts the hardened mold.
Sheds light on the old,
exceeds with control.
Opens mind apart,
so she can receive.
are hard to deceive.
Quenches dire thirst,
from cold fears and worries.
Warm amber lights burst,
to create glories.
Subconscious is free,
shadows stand in place.
Angelic song keys,
fill abyss with grace.
with pure divine love.
on land and above.
– Grace Y. Estevez – Reddy
Thanks so much.💕
Stunningly beautiful pen ✨💫✨💫
Thank you so much.💕
Like all your writings, profound and existential, they invite us to reflect.
Hugs from afar, friend Grace.
So nice to hear, my friend. Thank you so much 💕
I agree with Lincol – “existential” is exactly the right word for this poem!
Thanks so much, David.💕
I like this message about how old dreams and thoughts can return to us:)
Thank you so much.💕
Thank you so much 💕🙏💕
Thanks so much, Gabriela.💕
My pleasure hon 🌺🌸🌹
Speechless almost. Divine perfection. Especially love “angelic song keys.” You make me want to write with my heart again. You have such wonderful writing. 🌸🦋
I am thrilled to hear that you enjoyed it, Jessica. This truly means so much to me. Thank you so very much.💕
Your words are just gorgeous Grace! 💗
Happy you enjoyed it. Thank you, my friend.💕
Of course I did Grace! 💞
This to me is a classic “Grace masterpiece”! The rhyming, the flow, the meaning and the magical writing all blend beautifully. Marvelous as always my friend 🤍🤗
You are so kind, dear Grace. Thank you so much, my friend. Delighted to hear you enjoyed it.💕🥰💕🙏💕
Nice and precise! Goes straight to the heart. Xoxo
Thank you so much, dear Selma.💕
A beautiful, contemplative poem Grace
Thank you so much, Sadje.💕
I love the drip of your words in this poem, Grace! Beautiful.
Happy you enjoyed. Thank you so much.💕
It’s a beautiful though provoking piece, so well written, Grace! 😊💖
Thanks so much, Kk.💕
My pleasure 💖
Nice piece ✍️
Thanks so much 💕
Beautiful my talented friend!
Thank you so much, Belladonna. Truly appreciate it, my friend.💕
You’re so welcome 🤍
I love the way you wove the connections together, Grace! Beautifully done 💞💞💞
So delighted to hear you enjoyed it, my friend. Thank you so much, Dawn.💕
Beautiful & meaningful words written in poem.
“Sprit protected, with pure divine love .
Interconnected, on love and above “!
Very nice write ✍️.! I like .
Thank you so much 💕