Broken hinges,
power strolls.
Greed infringes,
lessons scroll.

Sugar wishes,
shine on goals,
repair glitches,
to fill holes.

Full view mixes,
results show.
Hollow fixes,
wealth soon grows.

Scratch deep itches,
self control.
Find clear niches,
fill lost roles.

Build strong bridges,
pay the toll.
Smooth out ridges,
future rolls.

Climb up inches
pave clear roads.
Conquer flinches,
solid mold.

Gleam with riches,
choices glow.
Faithful switches,
help hopes flow.

Velvet kisses,
comforts soul.
Sews and stitches,
new and whole.

– Grace Y. Estevez – Reddy

Response to Sadje’s picture prompt on What Do You See # 205 September 25, 2023

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  1. β€œVelvet kisses,
    comforts soul.
    Sews and stitches,
    new and whole…. β€œ
    Beautiful, Grace ❀️❀️

  2. Beautifully said, Grace! Lots of work but the end result in your last stanza is worth every moment πŸ’žπŸ’žπŸ’ž

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