The ocean breeze
tousles my hair,
but brings me ease,
so I don’t care.
Walking on sand,
sway with the waves,
seashells in hand,
feel what I crave.
I wet my feet,
so cool and mild,
such a great treat,
savor my smile.
Misty sprinkles
jump on my head,
as stars twinkle
and slowly spread.
Whispering winds
chant messages,
feel touched within
find passages.
Wondering soul
is purified,
a massive hole,
now satisfied.
– Grace Y. Estevez – Reddy
Wow, stunning imagery! Love it!❤
So happy to hear that, Aaysid. Thanks so much.💕
Love the way you portray the walk on the beach!
Joanna
Thanks so much, Joanna. I am so glad you enjoyed.💕
I kid you not…I was seeing & sensing every line on my screen…as I was reading your beautiful poem, Grace ✨❤️💫
This truly makes my day. Thanks so much, Navin.💕
You’re very welcome, Grace ✨ ❤️ 💫
You painted a beautiful picture with your words. I love “Whispering winds chant messages” – I can almost hear it too.
I am so happy to hear this, Sandra. Thank you so very much.💕
Ahh, this is sublime verse, Grace. You’ve transported me back to my recent trip to the coast. Thank you for that. I love this poem. ❤️❤️❤️
I am so happy that you loved it, Jeff. Thanks so much, my friend. You’re the best.💕❤️💕
Aww, thank you, Grace, you are so kind. It’s always my pleasure to be here, and to read you. ❤️🥰❤️
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A beautiful visual. Lovely. ❤
Thank you so much, LaDonna. I’m glad you liked it.💕❤️💕
Gorgeous words–I don’t even know where to begin. These really stand out:
“Misty sprinkles
jump on my head,
as stars twinkle
and slowly spread.
Whispering winds
chant messages,
feel touched within
find passages…”
You’ve brought back some wonderful memories of my time along the Oregon Coast (aka Heaven). I miss the ocean dearly, but you’ve given me some brisk breezes, sand and salt spray today, Grace, and I appreciate it! So good! 🙂
This is so nice to read, Mike. Thank you so much. I really appreciate your wonderful feedback. So glad you enjoyed, my friend.💕
Every word is so well written and heartfelt!! Love it Grace!!💕
I’m so happy you enjoyed it. Thanks so much.💕❤️💕
Beautiful 😘
Thanks so much.💕
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Beautifully penned
Stay safe happy healthy and wealthy
Thanks so very much.💕❤️💕
Fantastic poem, my friend! Love the imagery and how this matches with the picture so perfectly.
Happy to hear that, Sam. Thanks so very much.💕❤️💕
Love those last two lines ❤️❤️❤️ as always, amazing, grace
So glad you enjoyed it. Thanks so much.💕
Nice poem. Nice picture too. Thank you.
Thanks so much.💕
You’re welcome. 🎄
So relatable! Beautiful imagery! Whispering winds.. well penned, Grace 👍💐💖
Thanks so much, KK.💕❤️💕
You’re welcome 💖
ahhh your words make me breath again Grace!💖
Thats so nice of you to say, Cindy. Thanks so much.💕❤️💕
truly a pleasure!💖
Ah, this is so magical and dreamy! Going along with this I wanted to be there. There’s such incredible appeal in your words. Beautiful, Grace ❤❤
So glad you liked it, AB. Thank you so much.💕❤️💕
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This poem is amazing. Every sentence, every word, is charming, and the imagery is widely on point.
Glad you liked it. Thanks so very much.💕
You’re welcome
Beautiful ❤️
Thank you so much.💕❤️💕
Very nice 👍🙂
Thanks so much
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Free time on sea shores, paradise ❤️
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Beautiful poem
Thank you so much.💕