Unwanted guest
that stood too long,
was here to steal
his favorite song.
It took his strength,
and then his hair,
he kept his smile
and rocked his chair.
It took his pride,
and made him shake,
he kept his wink,
and did not break.
It took his size,
and then his mind,
he kept his heart
and was still kind.
It took his hopes,
and then his life,
he kept his soul
and it survived.
He learned to sing
his greatest song,
it lives in him
where it belongs.
– Grace Y. Estevez-Reddy
Powerful words
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Poignant and beautiful. β€οΈ
Thanks so much.β€οΈπ
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This is amazing, so powerful, deep and magically written!!!! The ending is EPIC and the flow throughout is dreamy and magnificent! So well written, Grace! Youβre truly an amazing writer and continue to soothe my soul with such beauty!!!! π€π€π€
Thank you so much , Ace.It makes my day to hear that. I really appreciate your support and positive feedback. Much love to you.β€οΈπ
Soooo beautiful Grace!
Every line delivered so divineβ£οΈ
Thatβs so nice to hear.Thank you so much, Cindy. β€οΈππ
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This is beautiful.
Thanks so much.β€οΈπ
That’s beautiful Grace, I loved reading itπ―βοΈ
Thank you, Joweda. Happy you liked it.πβ€οΈ
Pleasure all mine π
Beautiful lines, profound ones!
Thank you so much, KK.β€οΈ
Very touching, Grace. <3
Thanks you, Lauren.π