Another message left unsaid,
with other thoughts now buried dead.
Just one more dream that has been drowned,
as drops of sweat bounce off the ground.
So many efforts hit the dirt,
mouthful of sand lead endless thirst.
Exhausted tries make hearts resent,
no room to hope for what comes next.
Close eyes so tight, let it all go,
let pressures fall, release control.
Feel energy rise up ahead,
positive vibes instantly spread.
Bubbly soft suds unclog worn ears,
warming cold hearts with salty tears.
Prideful free will gives one more try,
nothing to lose, good luck complies.
Efforts given effortlessly,
navigating life happily.
To want for nothing, gains it all,
no need to fear possible falls.
Shedding worries for tomorrow,
chips away possible sorrows.
Every last gain is meant to be,
disappointments can set goals free.
– Grace Y. Estevez – Reddy
Wow what a beautifully honest shared poem with such jewels of wisdom Grace. A 10! Congrats on 1,800 followers soon to be 2,000 and well deserved! ππ
You are so sweet , my dear friend. Thanks so much for all of your kind support, It truly means a lot to me. Yayyy for my 10 and so grateful for the 1,800. Much love to you.π
It’s always a pleasure to share our joy together. You are taking us by storm! π€πΎβπ€πΌπ€πΎβ and rock!!!! π
It sure is a joy to share. You are so sweet my friend. Thanks again.πππ
indeed and of course.. xo always! π
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I’m not sure why it is that I’m always able to deeply feel your work. My emotions are often all over the place & I’ve saved a few for inspiration on those days when I need a pick me up. Your work is better than a shot of tequila, my former go-to, lol!
That is so nice to hear, Tammy. Your kind words truly mean so much to me and I am grateful for your support. Thank you so much, my friend .π
Beautiful message, with a stunning rhythm and rhyme. Love it, Grace. β€οΈ
Thank you so much, Jeff. I am so happy you enjoyed it. This truly made my evening .π
Youβre welcome, Grace. Itβs always my pleasure to read you. Aww, Iβm so happy this is so. Happy weekend, my dear friend. ππ
πHappy weekend to you too, my friend. π
This is so meaningful and heartfelt! Loved it as always Graceβ€
Thank you so much. I truly appreciate all of your kind support .π
Beautiful from top to bottom, and such a positive message as always. Well done, Grace. π
So happy you liked it. Thank you so much, Mike.π
Such a wonderful poem, penned with wisdom and understanding. You write well, Grace. Amazing π
Thatβs so nice to hear, Lamittan. Thank you so much.πππ
You’re most welcome, Grace. β πΌπΌπππ
A beautiful poem with inspiring message, Grace. Loved the way of presentation ππ
This could be a song…full of your wisdom…I love the rythm, the flow & the depth…you amaze me every single time, Grace β¨β€οΈπ«
That’s so nice of you to say, my dear friend. Thank you so much. I truly appreciate your kind support .πππ
You’re very welcome, dear Grace…keep shining & expressing β¨β€οΈπ«π
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