Memories swept kept
lingering.
Actions encountered
triggering.
My different sides
commingling.
Your shadowed whisper
sniggering.
My head was always
combative.
Unfocused mind was
abstractive.
Tried hard to make life
attractive.
Wishing my path was
refractive.
All options arrived
rapidly.
Desires entered
avidly.
Experiencing life
vividly.
Finally living
happily.
– Grace Y. Estevez-Reddy
Wow! Wow! Wow!❤❤❤
Thank you Anushka. So sweet.❤️❤️❤️
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This is so so beautiful!!!! I love the style and rhyming of this one, it’s so creative and unique!!!! Amazing write as always, my friend!!! I always look forward to your pieces, they are all truly spectacular!!!
Thank you so much my friend.Your words always add shine to my day.Truly appreciate you Ace.❤️💕
I love that while reading your work, I’m also learning. Thank you! Although I’ve been blessed in publishing some of my poetry, I’ve never considered myself to be a “poet”. The year, even with so much to pull from, I haven’t been able to create anything I’m happy with. You have inspired me to keep trying.
Thank you.That is wonderful to hear. I am smiling wide right now.It makes me so happy that you are going to start writting again. Have you considered putting some of your published pieces on WP? I woud absolutely love to read some. ❤️
The poem 5thgenerationgirl is one & the most recent (from 2015) others are from ’08 & when I was a child. Have to dig them up.
I absolutely loved 5th generation girl, truly a masterpiece,Tammy. I am really excited to read more. ❤️💕
Thank you. I’ve only been posting once a week because I’m learning how to use & navigate not only word press, but computers in general. I’m old school pen to the paper because it’s more intimate, allowing my words to flow freely w/o distractions from computer functions.
I can relate. I write way quicker than I type…lol
This is the “finally living” that is the best, isn’t it!After all the ups and downs.
Very nice Grace
Absolutely.Thank you so much Marie.❤️💕
I definitely had a combative mind, and this poem feels much like a reflection in a pool to me.
So glad to hear you could relate to it.❤️💕