Climbing up an endless rose,
slippery ride, hold tight to hope.
Pulling up while sliding down,
turns his bright smile into a frown.
Thorny stem transforms to steps,
making this chore less complex,
fragrant scents perfume the air,
somehow life starts to seem fair.
Misty rain cures his thirst,
he wonders which effect came first,
knowing rise is not endless,
or being able to progress.
Then it happened rapidly,
his legs ascended avidly.
At the top, he felt a hug,
from his awaiting ladybug.
– Grace Y. Estevez-Reddy
Aww what a magical and enchanting piece, Grace!!!! You described the beauty of nature so vividly, with crisp attention to detail and a dreamy flow!! I especially love the ending, so pure and filled with love!!! Well done, my dear friend! I absolutely LOVE this one!!! π€π€π€ Canβt wait to see what your beautiful soul does next π«
That is so nice to hear . I am so happy you liked it , Ace. Thank you so much for the wonderful feedback. I truly value and appreciate you. Much love, my friend.β€οΈ
Love the ending. What an image–the waiting ladybug after all the battles.
Happy you liked it, Haoyando. Thanks for the feedback.ππ
I liked the imagery of the thorns turning into steps for the sweet little ladybug!
So happy you liked it, Stine. Thank you so much for your feedback.π
The ending is kind of amusingπ
A lovely piece!
Thank you, Dera.π
What a beautiful piece! Hug from the ladybug!! Good one βοΈ
Thanks so much, KK.β€οΈ
Thans so much, KK.β€οΈ
Precious and multi-layered!
Thank you so much, Marsha.β€οΈ
Great verse!
Thank you so much.π
Youβre welcome
Beautiful!
Thank you so much Vignesh.π
You’re welcome π
Gifted and talented, I really enjoy reading your poem Grace. Keep on going.
Thanks so much, Jawolfe. I really appreciate the kind words and support.πππ
Beautiful poetry.
Thank you π