Inner Flow

I tap my feet
to my own beat.
I move around
on solid ground.

I step on land
not on quicksand.
I make mistakes
but never break.

I form techniques
for what I seek.
I do not speak
words that are bleak.

I catch the ball
my goals befall.
I hardly wait
or hesitate.

I try to touch
but not too much.
I expand grace
but do not chase.

I search inside
follow my guide.
I emit light
make dark paths bright .

I like to live
life judgments free.
I know that you
are one with me.

I build a life
with my insight.
I choose the views,
paint joyful hues.

– Grace Y. Estevez – Reddy

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  1. The entire poem is soo amazing dear Grace, especially these lines : lovely

    I search inside
    follow my guide.
    I emit light
    make dark paths bright

    🌞 Grace of the Sun ❀✌

    1. You just placed a huge smile on my face, my friend.Thanks so much for your thoughtful words, Suma.I truly appreciate them.πŸ’•πŸ™πŸ’•

  2. Wow Grace, this has to be one of my favorites of yours!!! The flow and rhyming is so soothing! I love the authenticity here, it’s truly inspiring/mesmerizing! And the ending is, as usual, EPIC!!! Perfectly done, my friend πŸ–€πŸ€—

  3. Always such a joy to read your work, dear Grace; and even more so when I get to read your poems in the evening. Such a lovely way to end my day. Beautiful, my friend. ❀️❀️

  4. It is extremely hard to appreciate and optimistically reflect back upon oneself, to find the strengths as opposed to the weaknesses. It is so great that you have achieved this!
    I step on land
    not on quicksand.
    I make mistakes
    but never break. – amazing!

    1. Thank you so much, Garima. I agree , it is hard. At times we can be our own worst critics but self reflections truly help. Thanks again.πŸ’•πŸ™πŸ’•

  5. Wowww..! My sweetie, this is fantastic..! I truly loved it..! The RHYMING was really amazing dear..! You’re the RHYMING QUEEN..!πŸ€—πŸ’–πŸ’•

  6. I build a life with my insight! A beautiful thought, Grace! Loved it.πŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ’πŸ’

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