Words create pictures,
set deep in my mind,
Colors turn intense,
as I paint my rhymes.
Once they begin,
they keep going non-stop,
sometimes carrying tones
that feel very sharp.
Sharp paintings that dance
inside of my head,
linking every word
sewn with a clear thread.
All prior nonsense
somehow feel so real,
delivering a message
made up of pure steel.
Steel that becomes stainless
like a pretty view,
finished smooth and shiny,
still feeling confused.
Embarked in a passage,
with no start or an end,
instead, it expands
and seems to extend.
Extending quite far
reaching, no time or space,
combining designs,
touching, a state of grace.
Embracing large portraits
show up in great sums,
composing my thoughts,
as I silently hum.
– Grace Y. Estevez
Great as usual
Thank you so much Mina. I appreciate your kind words.❤️
Grace, you deserve more good words and encouragement, you are a perfect writer
You are so sweet Mina.Thank you.❤️
You are the most welcome my best friend
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Breath given life.
Yesss!❤️
Wow Grace, this is so so beautiful!!!! That first stanza is literal perfection!! I love the way you gracefully and effortlessly weave rhyming into your pieces!! I always look forward to your posts and can’t wait to see what you do next!!!! You’re amazing!! Much love, dear friend 🖤🤗
Thanks so much Ace. I find myself looking forward to your posts as well. I truly appreciate all of your positive feedback. You always put a smile on my face. Much love my friend.❤️
Aww you’re so kind!! I truly mean every word!! 🖤🖤
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